Marquetta Gimm: challenging matter. seek on google. it can help!
Nikita Schroepfer: If you want to present two possibilities for what life is (poetry or melancholy), then it has to change. Right now, as it reads, it seems to present three possibilities for some unknown choice.Just put a long dash or a colon after the word life instead of a comma, and it will be understood that the other two words are choices for what the first is. You may even drop the question mark if it's a headline-type title."Life - poetry or melancholy?"...Show more
Branden Round: sophisticated matter. look in google and yahoo. that will help!
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